What Edmund did over his summer vacation

Blocks and general downer attitude notwithstanding, as I'd gone so far, I have finished and tied together the pieces previously posted here into a full update to Harold and Morgan:  Not a Romance.  Chapter 4 is here, and about half of it is old-ish (though edited) and about half is new content.  Please review if you are so inclined.  Feedback heavily drives this story.