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rthstewart ([personal profile] rthstewart) wrote2011-08-30 08:48 am

More TSG AU commentfic

Mary, Peter, Asim, Eustace, Alligator Snapping Turtles, and Alligators.  [livejournal.com profile] anastigmatfic is magnificent and awesome and really you have to go read this right now.

Also moonshine, the Florida swamp, and a missing camera bag.  Though I am wondering what a pair of leopard-spotted Y-fronts are and I'm too scared to google it.

    “Macrochelys temminckii is one of the largest freshwater turtles in the world, Eustace,” scolded Mary, “and you’d do well to show it somerespect.”

    Mary had been ecstatic at the sight of the thing. Of course she had: what the locals called an ‘alligator snapping turtle’ was enormous, thickly spined, and resembled nothing so much as the illegitimate offspring of a rhinoceros and a pangolin – one with a bad, bad hangover and the head of a dinosaur.

bowing to the inevitable

[identity profile] h-dash-h.livejournal.com 2011-09-01 03:30 am (UTC)(link)
Hello, "H" here. I figure if I'm going to be wrting comment-fic drabbles I'm well past the point at which I should just open an account specifically for fic-related activities. "h" and "dash_h" (since I normally signed "-H") were taken, so "h_dash_h" it is.

So... to date I have not written fic. However, once I read [livejournal.com profile] snitchnipped's comment

Peter/Mary? Yep, count me in. She's a character who is attracted to the most magnificent of any species, after all.

immediately after reading the reference to the moonshine, the "Magnificent!" drabble hit me over the head and absolutely demanded to be written down. That almost never happens to me, and I have usually squelched it on the rare times that it does. However, this whole community is far too much fun, and I've been trying not to squelch that sort of impulse these days. And anyway, the proximity of Peter, a hangover (with the likelihood of vomit) and Mary simply required it. Not owl vomit, but really, there's no way she could resist.

The peyote response was a much more difficult affair (in part because I wanted to get it posted before I lost my nerve). And my initial impulses and hurried research (on tequila varieties, about which I know a bit from a friend who is a connoisseur, on which tribes in that part of New Mexico might actually use peyote, and on what a peyote ritual is like and how likely a tribe would be to allow outsiders at that time, and on the meaning of Mexican names for a bit part character who supplied the quality tequila but got cut from the final version) did not quite line up, causing me to discard two other attempts.

Also, it's just long enough that it needed more detail than the quick punch of the first one, which had me going back and forth to your and other folks' entries trying to figure out how to work it in. Anyway, I'll have to see about the Further Adventures of Eustace and Mary in the Desert, as observed by Peter and Asim. I'll post it in my journal if I do, and will try to keep up with what everyone else is adding :-)

Anyway, I have long had an interest in fiction writing, but simply lacked anything to say. Tossing about snippets is apparently the motivation I was lacking.

-H
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Re: bowing to the inevitable

[identity profile] rthstewart.livejournal.com 2011-09-01 03:53 am (UTC)(link)
And he researches!!! Oh it is a madness and a disease. I'll never tell a soul. Truly, this is just delightful. Comment fic can get a bit disjointed, but it's such fun. And oh gosh, I'm going to start gushing about fandom goodness. On a more serious note, when I was going through some fannish angst, one reader, Miniver, had said that if nothing else, writing is obviously a pleasure and an outlet for my creativity that I needed. And this is it, precisely. Apart from the communities that develop, there is, inherently, the joy of creating and that ability to muzzle the censor and put it out there for fun. So, I hope you enjoy that process. And if you are writing 100,000 word epics on A03 in a year, I won't say "I was there at the beginning."

Re: bowing to the inevitable

[identity profile] snitchnipped.livejournal.com 2011-09-01 05:59 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, and I was there, too. And I stumbled into the NFE, writing the first piece of fiction in over ten years.

And just this week, I found myself stumbling into an unintentional sequel to the NFE I wrote. Eeeeeps. The bug, the bug, I has it!! And I've no one to talk to about it until the reveals are posted!

Re: bowing to the inevitable

[identity profile] anastigmatfic.livejournal.com 2011-09-01 05:52 pm (UTC)(link)
I am delighted to hear this and cannot wait to see what you come up with!

ONE OF US. ONE OF US. ONE OF US.