February 20th, 2011

rthstewart: (EBM)
Sunday, February 20th, 2011 10:56 pm
So, rather than working on completing the next chapter of AW, or the one after that, I ended up trying to do something short and sexy for Valentine's Day.  And so, have failed.  This isn't short, and it is not especially sexy, except at the end.  And, alas, most of it is explaining what Edmund would have been doing in the Lone Islands with Morgan, which is discussed at the end of the last chapter of H&M Not a Romance.  By the way, just think of Vice Director Alan of the House of Meryl as a young, sexy, blond, and not very smart Alan Greenspan.  (I just broke your brain, didn't I?) 

There is some info dump, and you know,  it's hard to write two characters who are emotionally so stunted.  Really, I want to shake them myself.  As I've sort of whinged about, I'm in a bit of bind there because there are things that are important to AW that would have been told in the H&M that story.  Well, I'll work it out.  Let me know what you think, and even a Meh is fine.  Really.  If I'm able to piece together the whole of the Lone Islands part of the story, I'd probably post it.

I have, by the by, been getting more of the "Love it, but..." commentary lately.  So, I'll be blunt.  This is Edmund and Morgan and that means sexual content but in keeping with the tenor of their relationship, this is all build up and T or PG-13 and not explicit at all.  I'm not at the point of writing M-rated Maenad of the Maquis level content for this couple.  I might but, so far, I find that allowing the imagination to fill in the gaps is more amusing.
ExpandSusan or Peter would have known that it was 2 Hearts Day in the Lone Islands )