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rthstewart ([personal profile] rthstewart) wrote2011-06-25 09:07 am

And Conclave concludes with a bang

Chapter 11 is posted.  I've not heard from a number of usual readers about the last chapter and I have lots to say about visuals and such, but for now,  here it is, and I hope you'll share your thoughts.

I wanted to share this, courtesy of Syrena, La Lonja de la Seda de Valencia, the Silk Exchange in Valencia, which she thought was rather like the conference room and the Bankers' Counting House and I agree.

 



Thanks so much for being so supportive.
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[identity profile] rthstewart.livejournal.com 2011-06-28 02:39 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much for giving the story a few moments of your precious time! I have wobbled on Morgan's character and did wonder if I had gone too far. But, this is her milieu. She has been preparing for weeks and she believes deeply that this is wrong. In one of the flashback chapters in TQSiT when she is briefing Peter on the mine, the problem is that 1) Peter still makes her very nervous 2) she WOULD go on and on, just as she had rehearsed it, because she is very good at the exhaustive recitation, and that is not what Peter wants to hear. This is all playing to her strengths and I think we wanted to see her succeed. So there. Thank you