I wonder if Edmund is just more subtle about it? Susan seems more inclined to press the point and try to convince Peter she is right. Which probably leaves Edmund in the middle. Otherwise Peter *is* acting like those men Mary dislikes.
I'm quite intrigued by this. It's hard to say if I think the outline should be bent in this direction, because we don't know where it was going before (except Not Here). It's odd to read the Peter/Mary relationship from the AU juxtaposed with the tragic arc between Peter and Susan from the main plot. (Ruth, you have created not just a spin-off universe, but a multiverse!)
I'm also intrigued as to the state of Eustace- hopelessly in love with Mary who is with Peter. Did that come from the commentfic as well? I hope he gets some sort of resolution (with someone else) before the train wreck. Bah. I need to get back to that Eustace and Jill surviving the last battle story that is resisting me.
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I'm quite intrigued by this. It's hard to say if I think the outline should be bent in this direction, because we don't know where it was going before (except Not Here). It's odd to read the Peter/Mary relationship from the AU juxtaposed with the tragic arc between Peter and Susan from the main plot. (Ruth, you have created not just a spin-off universe, but a multiverse!)
I'm also intrigued as to the state of Eustace- hopelessly in love with Mary who is with Peter. Did that come from the commentfic as well? I hope he gets some sort of resolution (with someone else) before the train wreck. Bah. I need to get back to that Eustace and Jill surviving the last battle story that is resisting me.