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rthstewart ([personal profile] rthstewart) wrote2011-09-08 08:21 pm

NFE, Research links

Worse disguised anon writer, EVAH. 
 
Well, OK, so maybe you didn’t guess immediately that Jess_in_time was me, though channeling a 16 year old was much harder than I had thought.  Food for Thought speaks for itself.  It was fun and easy and I hope my recipient liked it.  It was amusing to think that the Queen of No VISUALS did a mixed media fic, but it was fun.  It coincided with connecting with a trove of my mother’s family photos and I have lots of black and white pictures from the 20s-60s.  A college picture of my mother almost became Gran Susan. 
 
The Great Bonding, I love not man less but nature more, story (ILM) was another matter entirely.  Gosh, how to put all this down?  After rambling through this for a few days now, I’ve decided to not bother with my internalizations and hand wringing. 
 
There is a bit of a mish mash of Anastigmatfic’s characters and mine and in that sense it’s not compliant with her ‘verse in Breaking the Borders – characters like Cloudstrike don’t show up for another few years and the Pevensies ride Talking Horses because there aren’t other dumb horses.  You can assume, the OCs wandering about notwithstanding, that this is fully compliant with TSG. 
 
Team Licentious Trees was something Anastigmatfic and I joked about 2 years ago.  I started writing in Narnia because:
  • I learned from my landscaper that holly bushes were sexually prolific. 
  • Aslan to Bree, “I am true a Beast”
  • In PC, when the holly dryads drink wine, they get very talkative.
 
 I put the three together and came up with promiscuous, drunken Holly dryads.  And then I thought it would be hilarious to do a “I don’t think we’re in Kansas anymore” story where Susan and Peter are invited in their first year of rule to the Great Dryad Dance and realize that there’s no dancing and lot of wild dryad tree sex, because that’s what Trees and trees do in the spring. 
 
This leads to a decision for the Pevensies.  Do they go all White Man’s Burden to reform the colonial territory and literally tame the savage beast?  Or do they go native?  And if they did go native, thought rth, what happens once they go back to England?   “Oh!  Shiny!”  and rth got distracted by that idea and TSG was the result. 
 
Other influences, research, sources, and inspirations however fed that seed that became this story. 
 
Inspirations for rituals
  • I'm not the first to think in this direction.  The wonderful Bedlamsbard described the aftermath of  Peter’s marriage to a sentient Narnia in a fertility rite, but we do not get the actual rite. 
  • Riddling:  Bedlamsbard suggested that Edmund riddles with a dragon, but again, we do not see this; Snacky wrote of Edmund riddling with a Sphinx; ages ago, Miniver, when I discussed kingmaking rituals, wrote that she always thought a riddling challenge would be wonderful. 
  • Anastigmatfic wrote the ritualistic dance and sexual content in Sun Tides, but no kingmaking. 
  • Linneasr reminded me of the mythos of Epona
  • There were the Celtic kingmaking and great marriage rituals including the feis temrach and banais righe
  • The White Horse is common in numerous mythologies. 
  • Pomona is mentioned in PC, though I expanded her more broadly to the earth mother goddess with attributes of Flora and many others.  Here and here and  lots of other places.
  • Marion Zimmer Bradley’s Mists of Avalon famously includes Arthur’s Kingmaking at Beltane which includes a ritual deer hunt and ends with a Great Marriage with Morgaine, Druid priestess/goddess (and half sister, oops).    
  • Beltane and other pre-Christian rituals incorporate fertility-based rituals (lovemaking, women running through fields during menses).  Here  and here, among others
  • Other seasonal rituals
  • From my college Catholic theology classes, I learned how early Christians co-opted pagan rituals, some of which ended up in my Christmas story.  The Easter candle in the baptismal font has its roots in fertility, with a ritual of dipping a dagger or other phallus (symbolic or literal) in a font, well, or other feminine receptacle (again, symbolic or literal).
  • Clio put me in the direction of various enthroning ceremonies.  
  • Egyptian rituals included the Ritual Kiss and the concept of being encased in a womb like thing and breaking free.  Here and Here
  • Many faiths incorporate concepts of the cycle of death and rebirth. 
  • There were elements of initiation into the greater mysteries in the Water of Life rituals from Dune
  • The Fire Salamanders are described in The Silver Chair and are also mythical here, and associated with elemental fire. Xucoatl is based upon the Aztec serpent god.  
 
Not Great Marriage but Great Bonding
I had originally thought along the principles of a Great Marriage in the Celtic tradition, but that ended up being unworkable in a vision of Narnia where there is not a lot of traditional marriage.  Also, I realized that I did not want an exclusively male ritual.  I was dealing with a brother and sister so that meant steering clear of the “great marriage” as that could quickly lead to uncomfortable places.  
 
A Multi-cultural Narnia
The Narnia I’ve developed is a very multi-cultural place.  I always knew that, like the death rituals explained in TQSiT, there would be several rituals, specific to different species.  I’d hinted at some of these from the very beginning– Peter mentions nestbuilding without hands to Richard.  Susan reflects on the centaur narcotic ritual Peter underwent in TQSiT. 
 
 
A huge, huge thanks to [livejournal.com profile] snacky for giving me the time to do this right and who has held my hand as I negotiated this very personal project. 
 
[livejournal.com profile] linneasr, Clio, and [livejournal.com profile] harmony_lover have been hugely supportive through this.  [livejournal.com profile] h_dash_h was as well, though he didn’t know it.  Miniver gave me the riddling idea.  And of course there are the readers who would see my odd reference to it and say, “no, really, we do want to read this.”  So, here it is.
 
  I had more, about what an intensely personal project this became.  blah blah blah.  It’s all so much navel gazing, but if you PM or email me, I won’t stop talking.
autumnia: Susan Pevensie, 1942 America (Susan (writing))

[personal profile] autumnia 2011-09-09 01:30 am (UTC)(link)
I just went back and re-read "Food for Thought"; now I feel silly to not have figured it was you... though, part of me thought it was possibly [livejournal.com profile] anastigmatfic given the visuals. But clearly, with all the research and how Susan was written (or the letters, the journal entries) and the reference to Jill being from the Caribbean, I really should have known better! (Though, I drew a blank at the slang.. I think I should go look up what some of those acronyms mean.)

I had been thinking your bonding ceremony would be in a similar vein to [livejournal.com profile] bedlamsbard, but yours was very good and different in its own way. And given the ages of Peter and Susan at this time, it makes sense why it would not have been something more Celtic-based (though not as crazy as Morgaine and Arthur in Mists of Avalon).
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[identity profile] rthstewart.livejournal.com 2011-09-09 09:51 pm (UTC)(link)
I had originally thought it there would be a Great Marriage/Romp, then read Bedlam and got all the grief from my critics in the intervening months and so backpedaled. I also wasn't sure there was anything I could add to that story and I get tired of being labeled as the degenerate. But, I did want to do the multi-cultural, multi-challenge story and then the opportunity arose here. I had always assumed it would be Peter alone and then once I actually started writing, I wanted to include Susan and realized that Great Marriage just didn't fit and it became the Great Bonding instead. I went further than I have before here -- at least that's how it feels - but even so there are some things I'm just not interested in exploring.
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[personal profile] snacky 2011-09-09 02:10 am (UTC)(link)
This story was so much fun to beta and to read. It was one of those stories that had me looking forward eagerly - I couldn't wait to read each ritual. And each section was deeply satisfying. I think I told you already that my favorite was the Fire Salamander (yay, I was an inspiration! :D), but I loved them all - Susan in the lake, Peter in the egg, the hunt... all of them were fantastic and brilliantly done. And that we got to meet the guards, so early on, and Edmund and Lucy's perspectives on the all the goings-on. It was all fantastic. Thanks so much for letting me be a part of it.
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[identity profile] rthstewart.livejournal.com 2011-09-09 09:52 pm (UTC)(link)
I could not have done it with you and you understood better than I did what was going on. Thanks so much.

[identity profile] a-blue-jay.livejournal.com 2011-09-09 05:43 pm (UTC)(link)
This story was... well. I'm trying to find the words here, and kind of failing. Overwhelmingly amazing?

I didn't read it until after the reveal, so I knew it was yours, though I'm sure I would have guessed even if I didn't know. (The other story, incidentally, I had no idea. I noticed the common ideas, but I thought it was just someone who had been influenced by you, the style was so different! I never even seriously considered it!)

I don't think I can isolate a single thing that I loved most. If I try, it pulls in the entire story. As long as it is, it's a single unit.

I just finished reading "The Hero with a Thousand Faces", and am now reading "The Golden Bough". This story, therefore, hit a lot of shiny new buttons.
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[identity profile] rthstewart.livejournal.com 2011-09-09 09:41 pm (UTC)(link)
Joseph Campbell! Frazer! Thanks for the comments about my younger alter ego, Jess! As for ILM, well, I appreciate any commentary and FB I can get. I am glad you liked it. Xucoatl seems to be the most popular, though it was the final challenges, Smoke, Walk with the goddesses and the Revel, unsurprisingly that gave me the most heartburn and where I had the most difficulty. I did not fade to black there as snitchnipped pointed out and pushed into places I've not gone before. I wonder if I drove off some readers given the very quiet response over on ff.net so far. anyway, thank you very much. I hugely appreciate hearing from you.

[identity profile] h-dash-h.livejournal.com 2011-09-10 04:48 am (UTC)(link)
Ooh! The secret origin of TSG! :-)

Since this is a post about the background material (and I've commented on the story elsewhere) I will make a terminology quibble: while "narcotic" has come to just mean any illegal drug (at least in the U.S.), it is really more applicable to sedating drugs, and particularly (but not solely) opioids. Hallucinogens (psychedelic, dissociative or otherwise) aren't generally narcotics, properly speaking. Of course, the Centaurs can use any kind or combination of drugs you want them to use! In a ridiculously large wineskin...
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[identity profile] rthstewart.livejournal.com 2011-09-10 04:51 pm (UTC)(link)
I'll try to edit the above post for the correction but LJ ends up stripping out and mixing my formatting. Thanks for noting! and I may just have to be precise going forward.

[identity profile] min023.livejournal.com 2011-09-10 06:56 am (UTC)(link)
Left some reviews over at FF.net, so I won't bore you by repeating them here. I know you were funding this one very difficult, but I hope you consider the end result worth the angst - I certainly do. Oh, and as far as all the links and footnotes go, well all I can say to that, is that it's now my turn to go 'ooohh, Shiny' :-)
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[identity profile] rthstewart.livejournal.com 2011-09-10 04:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks so much, Min! A lot of the usual readers haven't shown up at all, so I really appreciate that you took the time to read it! Thanks so much! It was a very difficult, personal thing to do and I'm very grateful that you enjoyed it!
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[identity profile] harmony-lover.livejournal.com 2011-09-11 05:54 pm (UTC)(link)
I've said this before in many forms, over e-mail, over at FF, but I will say it again: This is one of the most fantastically beautiful things you have written. As min023 said, I hope you consider the end result worth all of the emotion and time you put into it. ILNM is an amazing ode to NARnia's beauty, a plea for tolerance of different cultures and traditions, as well as different religions, and perhaps most importantly of all, an examination of the beauty of love and desire in all its forms, with no shame or humiliation attached. There are so many messages in this story that are culturally important, and absolutely soul-touching to read.

[identity profile] min023.livejournal.com 2011-09-12 12:08 pm (UTC)(link)
This. This is phrased so much more articulately than I could have put it, so I will simply say 'hear, hear'
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[identity profile] rthstewart.livejournal.com 2011-09-13 02:47 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks, Min. I really appreciate it.
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[identity profile] rthstewart.livejournal.com 2011-09-13 02:47 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks so much. I've found that those who have commented on it have had better insight into it than I do! Thank you again