you can review anytime! slightly tipsy or fully inebriated! It's so difficult to write them sometimes. I have a scene already written that occurs 2 years after this and there are things they really should say and they don't. One reader said that she thought Edmund would end up being the more emotionally open one but that this chapter seems to suggest Morgan. I write them sort of see sawing back and forth. But, Edmund was actually very forthcoming in this chapter -- more than he has before, and this is something of the pattern. They ALMOST get there, wherever THERE is, and then BAM something happens and sends them backwards. Two steps forward, one step back.
The adolescent boy of TSG is melancholy about this. He's heard Morgan, he's heard rumors and stories of what he might have left behind, I think there's probably some bits and pieces that could be added about that from DT if I really wanted to pile on the Edmund angst -- which I don't. He's going to bury it all and move on and I think it will come bouncing back again once the war ends and Mirrim (I think that's her name) wants to be his always and forever and Mr. Pevensie finally wakes up and starts paying attention.
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The adolescent boy of TSG is melancholy about this. He's heard Morgan, he's heard rumors and stories of what he might have left behind, I think there's probably some bits and pieces that could be added about that from DT if I really wanted to pile on the Edmund angst -- which I don't. He's going to bury it all and move on and I think it will come bouncing back again once the war ends and Mirrim (I think that's her name) wants to be his always and forever and Mr. Pevensie finally wakes up and starts paying attention.