I loved this chapter (or half of a chapter) so much. You weave together lighthearted comments with the serious and heartfelt topics so well. I am happy to see them sharing more with each other, and trying to help and teach each other. She called him Edmund! Twice! The way you integrated the glimpses of Edmund's past into the earlier conversation, then had it serve a purpose at the end was great. It all felt quite natural. It seems like Morgan has heard the story of the Pevensie's beginnings in Narnia. I wonder if she already knows what Edmund did (though not, of course, the actual toll it took), or if this was left out of the retelling. Is this one of the first times you've actually addresses it in your main stories? I can't remember.

Thanks! I can't wait to read the next part!!!

J.Apple