Plz Red & Revu!!!

[rthstewart]

Going, going, gone.  Because you asked, because I wanted to, and because I really am just a panderer at heart:

Title: Harold and Morgan: Not A Romance
Category: Chronicles of Narnia
Character(s): Edmund Pevensie
Words: 6,220
Genre(s): Humor/Romance
Rating: Rated: T
Summary: A comedy of pollen, snark, biology and high finance, told in vignettes, featuring the Just King and an Evil Banker. Chapter 1: The Morning After in which dim princesses depart and Mrs. Furner frets about laundry.

URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5711916/1/

Comments

[autumnia]

LOVED it! You came, you pandered and you left us wanting more...

At least that's how I saw it.

I'm wondering if I really should have gone back and read the last chapter of BRD before starting this, but no matter. It was easy to pick up from where we last left off.

[rthstewart.livejournal.com]

Thanks. I nearly took it down. Phew. Hopefully, I get on with Chapter 16 now, but I admit this was fun. It's for all of you, and I would never done it without the encouragement.

[autumnia]

It's a BRD sequel -- you're not allowed to not take it down!

I was just reading the reviews for it and did not make the connection of Mrs. Furner and Ants to the letters between Edmund and Morgan that you had posted on LJ months ago! But now it all makes so much more sense.

And speaking of Chapter 16, I just saw this article on the BBC about Bletchley Park and their code-cracking computer... and immediately thought back to TSG and Queen Susan.

[rthstewart.livejournal.com]

Yep, assuming I leave it up and write more, I'll work that letter exchange into the next chapter. As for Colossus and the Codebreakers of Bletchley, it really is a fascinating story, especially in that most of them toiled in obscurity and said nothing of what they did during the war until decades later. You can tour the facility I believe. I remember the movie Apollo 13 where the Tom Hanks character says, "And now, we can store a computer in a whole room!"

[keeperofqkeys.livejournal.com]

Oh em gee, itz leik gr8! Plz wrt moar!

[rthstewart.livejournal.com]

I think broke something. It HURTS to write like that!

Not a Mary Su!! Though I'd love to see someone try to spork it!

[keeperofqkeys.livejournal.com]

It probably took me close to 15 minutes to decide how to write that....

[metonomia.livejournal.com]

Now I'm pandering for you to pander to us some more. :)

TQSiT 16 though...yes, let's do that. But more Harold and Associate Director Morgan!!!

[ilysia-039.livejournal.com]

Oh, by the way (not related to the topic at all), I wanted to drop a quick thank you for the rec you dropped for me on AsCast. I really do appreciate it, and it's wonderful (not to mention head-swelling) to hear such things. So, thank you again!

[metonomia.livejournal.com]

Oh, you are very very welcome! It was absolutely my pleasure.

[min023.livejournal.com]

OMG, this is brilliant. pls, pls, write some more. Update ASAP (OK, I can't do the teenage fangrrl thing, and I won't try anymore, lest I make you throw up)

You do this stuff so well... light-hearted, funny, sarcastic, snarky, snappy... Oh, I just love it.

Oh, and BTW, do you realise you're almost responsible for cracked ribs? Got the notification in the office and couldn't wait to read, then had to try not to laugh out loud.

Like the other ladies, I'll definitely be pandering for more
Cheers
: )

[ilysia-039.livejournal.com]

*basks in warm glow of being pandered to*

I'll be off to write a review momentarily, but I just wanted to drop by and say very quickly (thereby summing up the entire review I'm about to write and rendering it rather pointless) that this is just... just fantastic. Oh, God, I'm so glad I was alone when I read this.

Oh, and by the way (though this is totally off topic), I just wanted to thank you again for the recommendation you did on AsCast. I just listened to it, and I rather blushed. My head's extremely swollen now- I really appreciate such comments coming from you. So, thank you!

[rthstewart.livejournal.com]

We sort of fought over who was going to rec what and I was irritated that I didn't mention Susan and Rabadash from Glimpses! Truly, it was privilege to be able to give the recs!

[wellowned.livejournal.com]

i can't write in that strange teen netspeak you've got there, but i wanted to let you know that i got introduced to your The Stone Gryphon series *somehow* and i've been absolutely fascinated by it. love your harold and morgan stories; i think they're adorable. and loving the intrigue of Queen Susan in Tashbaan.

please keep writing. i may not comment often (or even at all), but i'm enjoying every second of it. thank you for sharing it.

[rthstewart.livejournal.com]

Well, thank you so much for this! I so appreciate hearing from folks and am waiting rather eagerly actually to find out what lady_songsmith has to say. I know that some write because they want to know what happens. I don't have that -- that might have been why I started it, but it is not why I keep going. I really value the insights of others and enjoy the journey together.