Yay! A new chapter! Wonderful use of the Calormene who wished to "acquire" Morgan. So easily misunderstood, and it played into one of Our Heroes actually falling into a bit of prejudice for a change. And I love that you used the whole thing to get Morgan to actually blurt out how she feels. Edmund is so terrified that he's forcing her into something that he's usurping her independence in the opposite direction. And really, Edmund, she pursues volumes of exotic sexual positions with you. Are you really going to let some Tarkaan's absurd views on the incompatibility of female intelligence and sexuality influence you here? Of course you are, because the only person you can't judge properly is yourself.
Also- favorite line: "I shall be inclusive for your Northern preferences and include any being"
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Also- favorite line: "I shall be inclusive for your Northern preferences and include any being"
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