I can't promise anything for the poem (just back to school) but I'll give it a go. Even if I can't get anything fitting for the story for you, it'll be a good exercise for me.
As far as pronouns, I usually mix he with the name, and generally they would think of themselves informally, so I'd go with Reg over Tebbitt. But, you can always use last names if you think that that the characters themselves would think of themselves by last name. ~LotL101
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As far as pronouns, I usually mix he with the name, and generally they would think of themselves informally, so I'd go with Reg over Tebbitt. But, you can always use last names if you think that that the characters themselves would think of themselves by last name.
~LotL101