I find the whole of your work to be very detailed and enjoyable. Two particular tangents popped out at me. The first is what Mr. Pevensie thinks of all this. The second is whether or not the FON become involved with Oxfam or as they were better known in 1942, The Oxford families for Famine Relief.
I keep thinking Edmund needs a passion; the Just and Oxfam would be highly compatible.
On the subject of worldbuilding, this is all very good. My own theory is that worldbuilding is about recognizing the opportunity and executing a strategy to move everyone else towards your aspirations for the future.
On significant others, both Harold and Peter need to get a clue about England and quickly. Susan needs a cold shower, and Lucy ought to find a shy boy to give romance lessons to.
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I keep thinking Edmund needs a passion; the Just and Oxfam would be highly compatible.
On the subject of worldbuilding, this is all very good. My own theory is that worldbuilding is about recognizing the opportunity and executing a strategy to move everyone else towards your aspirations for the future.
On significant others, both Harold and Peter need to get a clue about England and quickly. Susan needs a cold shower, and Lucy ought to find a shy boy to give romance lessons to.
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