autumnia: The apple orchard in Cair Paravel (Pevensies (at the Cair))
Karen ([personal profile] autumnia) wrote in [personal profile] rthstewart 2011-09-14 07:52 pm (UTC)

Lovely, just absolutely wonderful! I also like how you merged your world with a bit from [livejournal.com profile] edenfalling. And after reading the NFE stories, this was a terrific sequel to "Out of Season" -- it seemingly picked up right where that story left off.

I nearly squeed with joy when I saw Peridan's name here. So even after handling the Lone Islands together, he and Tumnus still do not get along that well. I'm rather surprised they managed to remain civil in Tashbaan then during HHB. :-) It is also awesome how you managed to find roles for Bree and Hwin once they're back in Narnia -- it certainly wouldn't be easy for either of them to adapt to living amongst their own kind again after so long a time in the South.

And yay for Bree in learning how to deal effectively with the Otters. I think he and Morgan must belong in some exclusive club now. Not to mention how adorable it is for him (and his foal) to still refer to Cor as Shasta. :-)

As for Aravis, she would be more suited to life in Narnia given how the Narnians don't judge by one's color and all. I actually hadn't thought of that before. I also feel the need to go make some icons from HHB now....

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