That was a great end to this section. I found Morgan's POV at the beginning somewhat uncomfortable to read - not because it wasn't good, but because I could really feel a sense of frustration in her to not be able to show what she was feeling. In that way, I think it worked really well. She may have missed it, but I certainly saw the moment of Edmund's opening, the "You will need to be here to do it?". These two really need their hounds/tigers! And I think that with the tree added to the broach, Edmund was trying to tell her something as well. I really hope they have the conversation about Seth's relevance at some point. The conversation with the beasts was also great - the whole thing feels very wistful and somewhat ominous haha. I have to admit that I am glad to know that everything works out mostly for the best. Probably one of my favourite things you have done in your entire group of work is the voices at the wall of water, and anything that connects to that and what comes after is wonderful for me.
Thanks again, I can't wait to see what you do next!

J.Apple