ext_153442 ([identity profile] sedri.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] rthstewart 2011-07-14 03:01 am (UTC)

Morgan's point of view worked out beautifully, and I'm so glad you did it.

Also, whinge away if it makes you feel better, but please know that as a reader, I have no regrets whatsoever. It might have been an even better story had it included a more compelling mystery, a stronger Gertrude or complex economic policy, but as it stands now the story feels coherent, tightly woven and is satisfyling. I'm glad you're telling it. Thank you.

Post a comment in response:

If you don't have an account you can create one now.
HTML doesn't work in the subject.
More info about formatting