Morgan's point of view worked out beautifully, and I'm so glad you did it.
Also, whinge away if it makes you feel better, but please know that as a reader, I have no regrets whatsoever. It might have been an even better story had it included a more compelling mystery, a stronger Gertrude or complex economic policy, but as it stands now the story feels coherent, tightly woven and is satisfyling. I'm glad you're telling it. Thank you.
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Also, whinge away if it makes you feel better, but please know that as a reader, I have no regrets whatsoever. It might have been an even better story had it included a more compelling mystery, a stronger Gertrude or complex economic policy, but as it stands now the story feels coherent, tightly woven and is satisfyling. I'm glad you're telling it. Thank you.