Someone wrote in [personal profile] rthstewart 2011-07-13 04:14 am (UTC)

lady songsmith, I think I'm with you on this one!

The way I read it was that Edmund was definitely giving her an out of her situation and she just could not pick up the cue. I mean, she can't even look him in the eye! They're both stunted, they're both at fault, of course, but I am just as much of "Poor Edmund!" as I am of "Poor Morgan!", if not more. But then again, I'm an Edmund-apologist.

And hey! We can't help liking Peridan so much when it's your fault you make him so damn entertaining and, well,"explosive." That was hysterical.

I really enjoyed seeing a bit of Susan here, and enjoyed her interactions with Linch. I do have a question... I can't recall, have we ever had Susan's POV from the Narnia side at all? Maybe that's why, as I mentioned in the last review I left, I think, that I haven't gotten my head quite wrapped around Queen Susan in Narnia.

I have really enjoyed the Lone Island stint, but I do look forward to your return to AW! The way both stories tie in together and interweave is just plain fascinating to witness unfolding, especially in the Spare Oom side, when we still get the Narnian flashbacks. Just wonderful.

--Indil




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