So the romance-that's-not-a-romance-turned-adventurous-journey has now become a caper. I love it! This story just keeps you guessing with all the plotty twists and turns. I can't wait to find out what's going to happen next.

I love your Linch Director and his paternal dilemma. I wonder if his gratitude and relief at having his children safe will outlast the 'Oops we've been married for years' that you've told us is coming.