I definitely find Morgan and Jalur to be as interesting as the canon characters, and this was once again lovely and such a perfect exploration of both of their personalities. And I love the depth it adds to your "Spare Oom" side stories. I'm quite fond of your other OC's as well, but these two are my favorite. Of course, Edmund is my favorite of the four, so perhaps that's not surprising. I like emotionally stunted, analytical characters floundering through the human side of life :-) Especially when they manage to form real connections despite their lack of any apparent suitability for relationships.

-H