This was so adorable and funny! I love the intricacies and intrigue of the Banking Houses. And arranged marriages, with someone on the side! Oh, Lone Islands, you are so very cosmopolitan. The NYC of Narnia. :D
You really gave Morgan some nice depth and complexity in this - I love Edmund figuring her out (and wishing for Jina!) and what she's trying to do, and the little flashback to the earlier Narnian Occasion. Oh, and their slow seduction with the contract, and their adorable awkwardness - Edmund feeling bad about missing Two Hearts day - this was a perfect story for them.
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You really gave Morgan some nice depth and complexity in this - I love Edmund figuring her out (and wishing for Jina!) and what she's trying to do, and the little flashback to the earlier Narnian Occasion. Oh, and their slow seduction with the contract, and their adorable awkwardness - Edmund feeling bad about missing Two Hearts day - this was a perfect story for them.