svgurl: (star trek: kirk/spock tos & xi)
svgurl ([personal profile] svgurl) wrote in [personal profile] rthstewart 2022-01-22 07:16 am (UTC)

I love this! Your Spock voice and observations are really on point. I was interested in his initial comparisons of humans and Vulcans, especially in how it related to Jim. He's so soft for him and I love it.

when the golden light of San Francisco sunrise is playing across the captain’s face and glinting in the errant strands of his hair.
Pretty descriptions.

I like how Spock explains the logic in the promotion but also adds in his own feelings and thinks about what Jim would want, which is the heart of it all. I like to imagine it would give him reason to not accept, or at least think long and hard about it first. Their shared bond is evident and I loved every word.

Great job! Thanks for picking and filling my prompt. :D

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