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little_lady_d ([personal profile] little_lady_d) wrote in [personal profile] rthstewart 2022-10-06 11:35 pm (UTC)

Re: Pathologic, Murky

oh i'm loving the sort of lilting rhyme and alliteration of the first sentence, dance to prance, prance to plants, say to she and sits and still, and waits to whisper with the sort of flowing rustling ending. the second sentence is blunter, and the last has a ... softness to it, like settling down to rest in the earth, where murky's parents love her.

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