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elementalraven ([personal profile] elementalraven) wrote in [personal profile] rthstewart 2022-01-18 10:39 am (UTC)

This is fantastic! I have no problem with the timeline at all, and I love how all the scenes at up to the final sentence. I love how you write Xialing so much: with all the vulnerability and strength and determination.
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