This is beautiful! I also love to see what people come up with when they assign each Pevensie a specific power, and I love that you gave them all subtle powers that really fit them, and that all seem to fit together. I also thought the writing of this was amazing!

"and his plans always, always thread - twist - triumph, even the narrowest possibility turning to success under his hands." - the twist of words here, love it!

(also Susan's power is making me think about a Leverage crossover)