I love this. To be clear: no salvaging was necessary, but I and SO glad you wrote MORE! Full disclosure: I’ve been mostly missing from 3SF for a week or so because a dear old friend passed away. And I’m only just seeing your lovely fills now, and I’m sorry for that! Because it feels like, with both of these, you’ve reached into my heart and written all the things I can’t find the words for. So I’ll be back later to rave over the lovely language and perfect character notes and achingly real details later. Because I definitely need to revisit both of these — thank you again.
Re: PART TWO; Because I can salvage this, I swear.