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jjhunter ([personal profile] jjhunter) wrote in [personal profile] rthstewart 2018-12-19 02:29 am (UTC)

Re: in which odysseus has not a little in common with gen from the queen's thief series

This is brilliant and even better than I was hoping for; thank you!

I like how you mix tones here - switching easily from 'favored child of Zeus Thunderer' to 'hard pressed not to roll her eyes'. It makes the contrasts between her deflection and the reality of what she was actually up to even funnier.

Also, yes perfect the echo of how Gen relates to various gods (I can totally imagine Athena telling Odysseus 'Stop Whining' and 'Go To Bed' as appropriate...or delegating that to Hermes while she goes to get another drink, hee.)

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